Guest Poet Louise Bell
Edge
You're the edge
I scramble to
I know
what you want.
You call me out
Anytime
Beckon me
to your branch of wonders.
I feed relentlessly
with greedy gulps.
I will return the favour
soon.
Jealous Ivy creeps
when he
Breathes
at me
I think we need
A code.
July, 2001
Louise Bell's Questions:
•Does the form work?
•Does the use of the title in the first line work or does it appear laboured?
•Is it too lovey?
•Do you get anything from it?
•Do you think that the use of images are appropriate?
•Is there anything that doesn't work that you have an alternative suggestion for?
Thank you
APW Guests' Pages
APW Home